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That ending?
That ENDING!?!?!?!?!

I say this with all the love and respect in the world and full of admiration and affection:

How dare you 

At 35 pages I got sucked in so damn quickly, which I already find incredible, only for me to be left yearning at my window overlooking the seaside for more.


This was SO intriguing throughout the entire read! Subtly terrifying, and morbidly fascinating. I'm SO painfully curious about this world, but there's also the PERFECT amount of info to tell us all we really need to know. 

Your skill for building up morbidity and discomfort with such beautiful renderings is inspiring. 

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awesome work! I didn't know so much compelling story could fit in so few pages! Bravo! :) 

DAMN that was GOOD!

hehe thank you so much! <3

loved this

devastated that this isnt an entire novel. fantastic work thank you!!

i promise i'll make something even better but longer one day <3

Hi, I'm having an issue where pages 23 to 25 don't load in Adobe. Could you confirm whether this is something on my end, or an issue with the PDF itself please?

oh don't worry, those pages were intentionally left blank!